He was smoking, his body was heated up. It was the after-effect of the report. He felt the strip of clips being dragged out of his pocket. He looked into the cold,ruthless face of his operator. He felt new clips being introduced and once again he felt his trigger being pressed.
55 is addictive :) CIAO
5 comments:
i'll be honest. when i read it the first time, i couldn't understand it at all. maybe i was just tired. but when i did, i reread it and when omg omg :)
keep writing! that's the beauty of a 55, it can be adapted to every kind of plot :)
* went omg omg i mean. this is really awesome stuff
have tagged on blog. check :)
My 2nd attempt..........
He stood with his legs slightly apart, fatigued with all the waiting. His yearning grew with every passing minute and he longed to nestle comfortably in her...
As he craned his neck for the nth time, he sighed contentedly as the welcoming form of a red bus loomed in sight.
I'd like to know your honest opinion and any suggestions for improvement. Thanks :)
@pseudo : mwah girl....luv ya :)
@anisha: so sorry...just got my net balance refilled...excellent 2nd attempt....better than the 1st,keep on writin :)
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